Happiness
Happiness brings joy and makes your life fun
When you’re happy you shine like the sun
Being happy is always great
Because
When you are happy you stand up straight
If you are happy you are someone great
you make life fun,
When you are happy you have a big smile
So always stay happy
so your smile will be there for a while
Being happy is what makes you a good person
Because
when you are happy you feel good
You can make other people's lives better by telling them to be happy.
Because,
when you are happy your life will be better
Funner,carefree and more
Happiness is what you need in your life
Because
you want to live your life being happy and not being sad,
I know life can be hard sometimes
but happiness is what brings me back up
makes me feel better.
lily-star
this term we have been working on slam poems and we had to read it out to the classroom and some were sad and happy.
Kia ora Lily,
ReplyDeleteI am a year six student from Paihia School. I really liked your poem about happiness. I thought it was excellent. How did you come up with this stuff? I liked how nearly every word rhymed.
Yours sincerely Liam.
Churr Lilly - star,
ReplyDeletemy name is Anyah from Paihia school, year 6 student. I like how you did a post about happiness.my favorite scenes is when you said, so your smile will always be there for awhile. On your blog you don’t have much posting. So I think you should add a little bit more blog posts. Anyway keep your good work up.
thank you for the comments,I chose happiness for my poem because I really believe that happiness is important and I came up with the words from my heart:D bye thank you
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