Monday, 26 March 2018

Metaphors

Metaphors



Lily-Star is a tall happy giraffe.

Lily-Star is a flexible spine, she bends with the atmosphere.

Lily-Star is an orange, colorful on the outside and sweet in the inside.

Lily-star is a diamond, shiny and bright on the outside and special and fragile in the inside.
Lily-Star
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 April 2018 at 09:37

    Hey Lily-star My name is Grace and I am 10 years old and I go to Waikowhai primary school and when I saw the picture of you, you actually look like you were a teenager but you actually 7 years old Wow! your sentences are amazing and the one with the tall happy giraffe It Kind of sounded like you because you are a very big girl . Keep it up.

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  2. Anonymous3 May 2018 at 11:12

    Hi Grace thanks for the comment I must of had a mistake in my thing I wright that Im 7 but Im not im a year sevan and im actually 11 sorry but thats for pointing that out.

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